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Re: ?
Flowers Shining brightly near a drabby old shack, or what some people would call it- "The ruins of a beautiful place." They were new friends but now are old. They ...
Oct 28, 2006 -
Re: I Think of You
I like the voice of melancholy. Same as ANI the 9th and 10th lines are a bit too long, but flow together real well. Also, I enjoyed one syllable words ...
Oct 28, 2006 -
Re: Snow...(flakes)
I'm actually nine... I'll need to fix that.
Oct 28, 2006 -
Re: Snow...(flakes)
Bjorn, I liked the even meter,and the flow of the words. Very " Snow-flake-like." I really enjoyed the rhythm of it all. -London
Oct 28, 2006